In the end

In the end

A Poem by Mk.t.g
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It talks about how the person wants the treatment he gave to the other back. He wants to be loved, just like he loved the other.

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In the end
I hope to see
All the things I gave to you
All the love I shared with you
All the strength I gave to you
I want them back from you

In the end
I want you to return them
And I hope to see them
In my fate ahead
I hope to see them
Turning into something sweet
Something I'd really like

In the end
I hope you wont leave
I hope you will stay with me
Like I stayed with you
Through the easy and hard
I stayed with you
Through the wind and rain
I was there for you

Giving all my best to you
All my love to you
All my life to you … you


© 2022 Mk.t.g


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love is tough and love how this write comes together, thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Mk.t.g

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reading!! :)
I loved your poem thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mk.t.g

1 Year Ago

Thanks for reading, Luna!
Nice Work and an interesting subject - reminds me of a Beatles Song.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is strange. You can give it but it doesn’t mean you can expect to receive it in return. It is a gift after all. When another feels the same way you have a little but if heaven, but there are no guarantees. Loving comes easy to some and us aloof with others. I enjoyed the read. Happy new year Mk t.g

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mk.t.g

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your comment, Chris! Happy New Year to you too!
I guess the only person who can love you and respect you infinite is you yourself. So I guess one should love him/her-self first .In order to be loved by others he/she should know they are capable to be. Amazing poem Mk.t.g

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mk.t.g

2 Years Ago

I absolutely agree with your point, Jenny! Indeed, in order to spend a life peacefully, pursuing sel.. read more
JENNY

2 Years Ago

Your most welcome.May god bless you with beautiful days ahead.
Mk.t.g

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Jenny!
'love' is an interesting thing, unfortunately you can't really define it in the simplest of ways.. But, it is among other things selfishness... Yes, because people expect it in return. It's no biggie since we're not talking about material things... Just the acts and words of kindness that let someone feel like they're special.

In another sense, it's selfless because you give all you can and do everything within your power for that other person.... And that will still be the case after the emotional high is long gone, and blind admiration is replaced by understanding...

There are many layers to the stuff, from the simplest chemical trick to get us to mate and reproduce to overheated infatuation to the most complex web of emotions and thoughts.

Heh nice write here.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mk.t.g

2 Years Ago

Thanks for such a wonderful and constructive review, Dennis! I really appreciate your review and com.. read more
Dennis Wolf

2 Years Ago

Sure thing.
Wonderful and generous words for love.
"Giving all my best to you
All my love to you
All my life to you … you"
I loved the complete poem and the above lines. My favorite. When we give love to someone. We hope the love is returned to us. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Mk.t.g

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much for reviewing, Coyote! Indeed, when a person truly loves the other with all his heart.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend and Happy New year.

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