Only Worth Silence

I won't give any for it will give it away, it's dark is all I can say. he he I just rhymed! sort of :D

Darkness has fallen

And Midnight strikes

A Black Rose is given

To a little tike

Dark clouds cover his head

As he fell out of bed

He cries in pain

But the only thing that replies

Is the sound of rain

He wonders what he is worth

To the cold cruel world

But before he could figure it out

Silence was all he could hear without a doubt.

Author's Note

Plz tell me what you think the moment you finish reading it :D

Reviews

[*~Imperfectly Me~*]

I really like the opening lines of this poem "Darkness has fallen, And Midnight strikes" I think they grabbed my attention and made me want to read more.

I do think that this poem could be made better if you corrected some flow issues. It may help to add some more punctuation. That may help readers know when you want them to pause for a second or more. But that is just my opinion.

All in all I do like this piece. I like the vision that you created and the darkness that is in this poem. Good Job!