Why the crying?

About the world's sadness

The sky is crying

Why is it crying

Is it sad 

Is it mad

At me

Or at the world

At the people who hurt

At the kids that slowly dying 

Why is it crying

Why are they dieing

I'm asking 

Please answer me

please hear the crying

I'm hearing it

Why can't you

Their hearts slowly dying 

Their souls loudly  crying

Why arent you hearing 

The screaming when there dying  

The heartbreak when they're crying 

I can and I'm slowly dieing 

Author's Note

Please tell me if it's good

Reviews

[Julia.Moore]

The love for haiku poetry was sparked during world literature studies, drawn to its ability to convey profound ideas in just a few syllables. Over the years, hundreds of haikus were written, inspired by moments of awe in everyday life, many of which are featured in the book Blue Harlequin. These haikus aim to inspire an appreciation for the simple beauty in life’s fleeting moments. Read the full article to delve deeper into the beauty of haiku poetry: https://aoidemagazine.com/what-is-haiku-poetry/

[Lola_Bee]

Very sad, the emotion well express and well presented.

[sarah]

Thank you so much

[Jamie]

great work! such a good read :)

[sarah]

Thank you so much was it really good

[Jamie]

Yeah I love it :)

[SmittyJas]

I read between the lines and it states the shape our world is in no one hears the weeping of the meek and I remember it They shall inherit the earth The Lord with hear their crying and answer their prayers. I tell you what you have written here is a wake up call for all to see what they should pay attention to is the cry of the meek. Blessings Oh Blessed writer.

[sarah]

Thanks so much