Struggle

The light in the dark,

the gates to my heaven,

my simple spark,

the six plus one is my seven,

you are the happy,

when i am sad,

when your snappy,

i'm sorry if i'm mad

now take the time to think about us,

i'm sorry for the words i say,

i don't want to betray your trust,

i tend to cope in different ways,

But you forgive

and i thank you for that,

I'm afraid you'll outlive,

and i will be the one who splats

Cause you are strong,

you deal with struggles,

i deal with them all wrong,

when i try the problem just doubles

I don't know what this poem is about,

the true emotion has the key,

i hope one day that chest will sprout,

and one day you will open me.

Author's Note

please review. just dealing with some problem with a guy friend so i let my emotion flow and well....this is what i came up with
thanks

Reviews

[Kyline Freed]

This is great! The rhythm follows a really nice pattern and it flows really good!

[DoormanDan]

You are a really good writer! i hope things get better between you and your friend soon!

[Alexis]

thank you :)