Lose Your Mind

Life as I know it

There is the life that you all see

There is a life inside of me

All I have are my memories

Creating life's unending dream

 

See the pictures dance past my face

Our hearts beat in a sychronized pace

Serindipiddy lights our path with grace

Reminds us all to keep the faith

 

Is this the end? Is there an end?

Where are we now? Did we begin?

Hold my hand now, this is it my friends

 

The deeper you go, there is a pulse

Stronger it gets, we see our ghost

Lose your mind, let it go, just let it go

 

The sun will surely rise today

If it doesn't you've won the game

Love's our only defense in this strange place

Reminds us all to keep the faith

 

We all laugh and close our eyes

Let the sun shine into our minds

Is this the place that you want to die?

Hold my hand we'll all be just fine

 

The deeper you go, there is a pulse

Stronger it gets, we see our ghost

Lose your mind, let it go, just let it go

Reviews

[ΨXO]

Your work drives me into a frenzy of ardor and zeal, it's wonderful. The emotional aptitude you include in your words is staggering. I wish I could hear these being performed by ya. Groovy work, I dig what you dug and approve it with a gold seal of psycho crookedness. Keep it up so I can read more of your stuff!

[Kim]

Wow, so wonderful, sincere and powerful. Loved the emotions entertwined in this and the awesome rhyme scheme.