OverHeated

I can't fall any deeper

I've reached my pleasure zone

Caress me in my frenzied heat

Pleasure like I've never known

Plump, silken lips slight

Upon my skin 

Out in front of the moonlight

Shadows crawl within

Perched upon the precipice

I slip to their grasp

Reaching out to end this plight

I shudder and I gasp

Softly, slowly I'm caressed

Skin to skin, I am blessed

Glowing from this paradox

Nothing's gone, nothing's lost

Reviews

[SuicidePact.]

I love the rhyming scheme, it just makes it so easy to read and say out loud, I want to clap or tap my hand to a beat when I'm reading this, it's flowing and it's brilliant.

[quixotic_rose]

Thanks for taking the time to read my work. I really appreciate your kind words.