Relying on Predictability

Relying on Predictability

A Poem by Arianna

Your
Simple
Easy
to map out
almost
Predictable
 I couldn't be
Happier

Your a
rock
Un-wavering
Un-changing.
Dependable

Black and White
This
Or
That
Never Both

The
ONLY
Thing
I can really
Depend on
Anymore

I'm
CRAZY
Like a Liar
on a
 Polygraph
s_c_a_t_t_e_r_d 
all over

I don't know
Up from down
Right from wrong
Cant decide for myself

Grown up
But still a
Child
Wishing I
didn't
 Have to rely on
Myself

Its not
 Boring
You know
to be
Dependable
Predictable
 Even

Because
 It means
That i have
SOMEONE
Other than
ME
I can rely on

© 2011 Arianna


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It is great to have some you can depend on believe I would not know what to do without Jake he is my everything

Posted 13 Years Ago


Your poems are always interesting and original!
(How about "nervous" like a liar on a polygraph? But I guess "crazy" works too).
Very nice job of expression, as usual.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


"I'm crazy like a liar on a polygraph." So love that line!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice write. So good to have that special person to depend on. I like the short line length and the way that works for the rhythm of this piece. Keep writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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