Buying your way into the attic

we're all just play things
if you buy into god
wich i dont,
but if you do.
your choosing to accept
that you dont control your life
chooseing to give up your freedom
in order to belive
that someone else is in control
that your a doll
one that they remotly care about
i guess it fits
when i got done with my doll
i killed it
or threw it away
and sometimes i just threw it away
just to see the "reaction"
of all the other dolls
id make them play
dress them in rediculous outfits
but after a while of playing
i got bored
id leave them
so tell me
all of you who buy into god
what happens when god gets bored
and puts all in the attic

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[JulieZee]

interesting metaphor. This would be a lot more powerful if you just left it as a metaphor.