Dont Cry For Me

Dont Cry For Me

A Poem by Arianna
"

no idea why i wrote this, lol its really kinda not me. but it was in my head.

"

dont cry for me

over me

im not worth the pain

im a broken doll

beyond repair

your tears

have better meaning

hold them in

wait

for somehing worth it

your tears wont help me

wont fix me

wont save me

crying over spilt milk

dosnt help clean it up

there are some things

its just not worth

so promise me

you wont

cry for me

over me

about me

dont let me be the cause

your tears

are better spent

on anything

but me

 

© 2011 Arianna


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Amazing poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


"im a broken doll beyond repair"

Really enjoyed this part. Yes I am have felt this way before. You know I like the flow of this, it is very good.


Posted 13 Years Ago


This was really simple and too the point, which makes the broken structure work pretty well. Overall, nice write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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