A Villain's Limerick

I thought this up in bed last night xD

There once was a young man called Sylar

Whose watchmaking skills were for hire

But what makes you tick

Excites him quick,

So beware this malevolent liar.

Author's Note

As always, any tips or critique is welcome, but this was really just for fun! xD

Reviews

[JR Darewood]

Haven't seen many Hero's inspired limericks!
This was clever.

[Lemunculus]

Thank you! I thought it up in the dark, I was like "oh no he's sending me a message" xD

[Devanshu Rajput]

limerick is a poem that can be written while keeping it's writing rules....you here followed them perfectly...

[Lemunculus]

Oh good, I hope that helped deliver what I was going for! :D

[Devanshu Rajput]

good luck , you followed well :) keep writing :)

[Lemunculus]

Will do! :]

[De 'Anthony Subban II]

i like your word choice that you have chosen

[Lemunculus]

Oh, thank you xD