Primal.

After watching Spirit: Stallion of the Cimarron

Little, by Little..

I'm starting to Realize that,

Maybe, we need.

To Learn.

How to Unlearn.  

What we have Learned.  

Maybe. 

Just Maybe.

  

Humanity’s primordial Mistake,  

is simply,

the fact that, 

We learned to Talk…  

Author's Note

enjoy.

Reviews

[Kirsty Woodward]

Sometimes I wonder what it would be like if we didn't have our sense of self; but then I would never be able to know what it would be like to have no sense of self because i'd need a sense of self to notice we didn't have one...
Anyway, silly comment, I know.
It's what this reminds me of.
The images go nicely with it. Personally I think your work doesn't need the aid of pictures because it can speak for itself but I like what you've done with it nonetheless.

[Desert Rose]

lol, i know, but i figured it would add more 'drama' to it, some people aren't good with words & prefer images & 'facts' ;) you know them well :P
& no, your comment isn't silly!! in fact i'm gonna save this!!
Thanks Kirsty!!! (^^)

[Kirsty Woodward]

You're welcome, Neo. I always look forward to reading your work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photos and good words. Thank you for sharing.
Coyote

[Desert Rose]

Thank YOU for your review Coyote!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Lydia Shutter]

What a lovely presentation this is! Interesting concept....and one that is certainly thought provoking. Lydi**

[Desert Rose]

Lydia! Thank you very much!! :)

[Valentine]

How great these are. Wow, more people need to see them. Valentine

[Desert Rose]

Indeed they should :) thank you for your review Valentine!

[EnglishMajor55]

Wow...
Just wow...
I have (ironically to the poem) been struck speechless. This was the most real thing I've seen in my life.

[Desert Rose]

i'd like to thank you for your wonderful words,
it was truly heartwarming of you!
i'll cherish this review forever! :)
-Neo

[M. L. F.]

Very clever, and a great point. Enigma is the s**t, by the way... Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
..Misty

[Desert Rose]

Enigma has kept me chill since I grabbed one of my father's CDs at around 8-9 :)
Thank YOU for reading (^^)

[Alias]

I often have the exact same thought. I'm reminded by the lyric from Apeman by the Kinks "given half the chance I'd be taking off my clothes and living in the jungle"
Nice write

[Desert Rose]

hehe, true,
we got what it takes to achieve higher consciousness & now more than ever..& what do we do?..something quick & easy..

[Desert Rose]

thank you for your time by the way!

[Hailey Juliet]

Show, don't tell. That's a lovely message and definitely one to contemplate! I love the simplicity of this piece and how you highlighted your message with photographs. Very effective use of two different mediums together. Thanks for sharing!

[Desert Rose]

Thanks again for reading & your constant support Hailey! :)

[Hailey Juliet]

You're most welcome. my pleasure!

[Amber Lily]

That was really touching with all of the pictures! A really unique idea to drive your point home, and I must agree. Our mouths get us into so much trouble, sometimes it would just be easier to keep them shut. Loved it :)

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Amber!! :) indeed they do ;P

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
maybe.......you are right....
loved the experiment......
:)

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Pushkar!

[Cassie]

The pics are taking the words and they are definitely speaking the words, I love love this. Maybe we need to unlearn what we have learnt and be like little tots, life will be so easier that way

[Desert Rose]

I'm glad you like it Cassie!! Thank you for your kind review!! :)