Awakening.

Glowing light of the Moon that Eve

October brought a pair to weave

Over simple passions & wine

Distant bodies, two souls entwine

Notwithstanding Circumstances

In their trysts they found solaces 

Growing steady, unwavering 

Heed the calls for awakening

The flames thru days have burned & turned

Scorched the nights & secretly yearned

As that bonfire must be contained

Resting cinders in ashes tamed

And Wind, only time will endow 

Hope of a wildfire, drift off now 

Author's Note

enjoy..

Reviews

[M. L. F.]

The flames thru days have burned & turned

Scorched the nights & secretly yearned
As that bonfire must be contained
Resting cinders in ashes tamed

Favorite stanzas above. They are really pretty. There is a lot of passion in this piece and that is nice.
Thanks for sharing it..
..Misty

[Desert Rose]

how sweet of you to review!!
working on a few more, hopefully done with one this week!
read morehow sweet of you to review!!
working on a few more, hopefully done with one this week!
Thanks!

[zunie frost]

Scorched the nights & secretly yearned
As that bonfire must be contained
Resting cinders in ashes tamed
And Wind, only time will endow
Hope of a wildfire, drift off now

i love this part
beautiful work my friend

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Again zunie!!

[zunie frost]

welcome !!! i'm looking forward to read more of you work

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Last stanza is mind-blowing!
I loved the surreal yet so vivid piece of art.
There were many lines that completely amazed me with their depth and meaning.
Great work.

[Desert Rose]

:) I'm glad you enjoyed it!! thanks again!!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Hailey Juliet]

This is a very beautiful poem! Wonderful imagery and some incredible metaphors. Very well structured and polished. Thank you for sharing!

[Desert Rose]

Thanks again Hailey!! i enjoyed writing this one!

[Lorraine Montez]

Last three lines were stellar. Great meter. Good rhyming. Sweet imagery...

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Lorraine! so nice of you to drop by! :)

[Lorraine Montez]

My pleasure, Neo ;}

[Ruth]

Effortless flow Neo...a joy to absorb and meander through...passionate and at the same time carries a tinge of heaviness :)

[Desert Rose]

glad you liked it! can't say that enough but i truly enjoyed writing this one!
Thank You Poppy Ruth!

[Lydia Shutter]

Lovely celestial references. Lots of passion between the lines. Well written. Lydi***

[Desert Rose]

though i enjoyed writing this & it took some time,
i feel like i'm not doing that feeling in me enough justice..
it's too cosmic to be contained in one body..believe! you! me! :)
let's see where this will take me..
Thank you for reading! i truly appreciate it!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

a highly descriptive piece that allows the reader to roam, not to rigid, well done, good read.

[Desert Rose]

Thank you for your review!! much appreciated!!

[Coyote Poetry]

The good description took reader to places and thoughts. I like the tone and honesty in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Desert Rose]

& in return, i thank you for your kind words & perception,
i'm really enjoying this!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem and you are welcome.

[Ghost]

Thanks for the read request. brilliant writing. keep it up.

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Ghost!
so nice of you to drop by & read!!