Burn.
A Poem by Desert Rose
sometimes,
in order to make deep impacts,
all you need to do is to say very little.
Come...
..reborn..
...undone...
....naked...
..timid…
….disarmed..
..revealed..
..secure..
..fragile..
…slowly…
..surely..
..burning…
…focused..
…very…
…focused..
….laser..
..focused..
…..look me…
….my eyes..
…they’re yours..
…..your eyes.....
..they’re mine……
..welcome..
..you’re home..
….trust me…
..trust you… .....closer.... ..closer... .....let go...... ...let's burn.........
…don’t fret….
..i’m you…
……you’re me…
..we’re one..
© 2016 Desert Rose
Author's Note
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enjoy..
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Reviews
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Wonderful strength to this...a connection understood and profound...humanity has forgotten such core roots...superb...
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
That Pulse of Awakening can do miracles...
Thank you :)
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Very nice this made my lips curved )
Thank you for sharing....
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
glad you liked it (^^) thanks for your review!
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8 Years Ago
you are Welcome my friend. :)
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I love the format of the words!
Keep it up!!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
thank you for your support, Emily :)
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very intense write,you are me,i am you,trust me
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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8 Years Ago
sometimes,
in order to make deep impacts,
all you need to do is to say very little.
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14 Reviews
Added on April 13, 2016
Last Updated on April 15, 2016
Tags: love, poems, simple, romance, deep, relationship, feelings, emotions, fire, flame, soulmate, burn, yin, yang, longing, memories, senses, eyes, time, space, union, passion
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