Burn.

sometimes, in order to make deep impacts, all you need to do is to say very little.

Come...

..reborn..

...undone...

....naked...

..timid…

….disarmed..

..revealed..

..secure..

..fragile..

…slowly…

..surely..

..burning…

…focused..

…very…

…focused..

….laser..

..focused..

…..look me…

….my eyes..

…they’re yours..

…..your eyes.....

..they’re mine……

..welcome..

..you’re home..

….trust me…

..trust you…

.....closer....

..closer...

.....let go......

...let's burn.........

…don’t fret….

..i’m you…

……you’re me…

..we’re one..

Author's Note

enjoy..

Reviews

[zunie frost]

very unique style my friend !!
i wasn't expecting this . very talented
nicely written

[Desert Rose]

Thank you so much!! nice to meet you :)

[zunie frost]

nice to meet you too !!!

[Shy_muse]

This was an amazing poem. At first I was confused with where you were taking it but by the end you had it all wrapped up like a beautiful present. It was so full of meaning and depth. Thank you for sharing this for us all to read. < 3

[Desert Rose]

you're welcome,
thank YOU for reviewing!
glad you liked it!! :)

[Hailey Juliet]

This was fantastic! It reads like a fuse burning quickly towards an explosive ending. I love the pace that it has, but also the story that is told even in this form. Wonderful!

[Desert Rose]

thank you!!

[Lydia Shutter]

There is a seductive urgency to your staccato lines. Very effective. I liked it. Lydi**

[Desert Rose]

it's hard to transmit your feelings over text isn't it? that's the best i can come up with :)
Thanks Lydi!

[Amber Lily]

To me, this comes off as a symbol for a fast moving relationship, or maybe one that cannot be said with words. Sometimes feelings are too strong to create sentences, just the look of intensity. A unique poem for sure :)

[Desert Rose]

Thank You!! Exactly!!! i sometimes struggle to find exact words or to rationalize..
so i say it as it is..
Thank you for your review Amber!! :)

[Amber Lily]

You are most welcome :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Different, out there and completely compelling, well done, great read.

[Desert Rose]

:) Thank You!

[Ghost]

Excellent poetry, unorthodox but really cool.

[Desert Rose]

hehe, i always find a reason to trip (^^)

[Desert Rose]

thanks again btw!

[Nicholas Shea]

This is really f*****g cool!

[Desert Rose]

thank you very much!! (^^)

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. You said enough to create thoughts and emotion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Desert Rose]

Thanks for passing by :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Pryde Foltz]

Yeah ... very nice work on this one, Neo. Message delivered with deep impact. Bravo.

[Desert Rose]

Pryde!! thank you very much!! :)