Solid and strong words.
"So much Seasons,
We have untold,
With just mere Dreams,"
The above lines were my favorite. You left a lot for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
i believe the 'fitting' word would be "So many* Seasons"
but because i'm writing in fours, i.. read morei believe the 'fitting' word would be "So many* Seasons"
but because i'm writing in fours, it seemed like the best word to fit & it's not exactly wrong
Thank you so much for your review Coyote! truly appreciate it!! :)
Distance is difficult, but can create a bond different than that which we find in person. It has it dark sides though, and quite a lot of disadvantages, which I learned outweigh the good... ;) Cool piece..
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
well, Dark or Bright, Joyous or Sorrowful, i'm living to learn..& learning to live ;) thank you!
8 Years Ago
Yep, when you're green you grow, when you're ripe you rot... ;)