Byronic.

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So much Distance,

We have covered,

With just mere Words,

Yet this Longing,

Unquenchable,

Unrelenting,

Unrepentant.

So much Seasons,

We have untold,

With just mere Dreams,

Yet this Recluse,

Enlivening,

Enblissening,

Enkindling.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Solid and strong words.
"So much Seasons,
We have untold,
With just mere Dreams,"
The above lines were my favorite. You left a lot for the reader to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Desert Rose]

i believe the 'fitting' word would be "So many* Seasons"
but because i'm writing in fours, it seemed like the best word to fit & it's not exactly wrong
Thank you so much for your review Coyote! truly appreciate it!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed this poem.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A follow me type of piece, well written and engaging, well done, good read.

[Desert Rose]

Thank You!! (^^)

[Amber Lily]

A piece that's very easy to relate to. We hardly know what the future holds for us, especially with the relationships we have with other people. All we can do is try to make our dreams for the future a reality, good work :)

[Desert Rose]

Exactly..
Thank you Amber!! :)

[Ardra]

wonderful work :) enjoyed reading it and could relate to it on many levels.. thanks for sharing

[Desert Rose]

Thank YOU for reading, Ria! :)

[fergul]

Ok, be my guest.

fergul.

[fergul]

Never said I was any bloody good. Tell you what, I'll have another bash and see if I can improve, got an idea about a kid from the past bubbling in the old grey matter.

I might even remove the first two crappy attempts, I was only taking the piss with them.

fergul.

[Desert Rose]

Okidoki (^^)
Will be waiting for your read request ;)

[fergul]

To be honest mate, I think Byron would be turning in his grave if he read this.

Sorry and all that, but I just can't churn out a review that strokes your ego, which is what most people on this site seem to do, it's dishonest.

[Desert Rose]

nope, fine with your opinion, so long as it's honest,
i'm not in it for the ego, quite the contrary ;)
"There's nothing to writing, All you do is sit down at a typewriter & bleed."--Hemingway

p.s. Byron can turn all he wants ;) & you're one to talk....

[Pryde Foltz]

Wonderful word-smithing, Neo:) Splendid read:)

[Desert Rose]

Thank you!!! much appreciated!!! :) i'll be reading yours now!

[wordman]

a powerful write,makes a statement !

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Wordman!

[Emily]

I really like how this is set up.
Keep it up!

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Emily! :)