Platony.

a Pebble,

in the Belly of Insanity,

an ice cube,

in the Mouth of Hell, 

a Blaze,

in the Gale of a Trachea, 

a Breeze,

in the Maze of a Nose.

an Aroma,

with every whiff,

a Wildfire,

with every stroke,

a Tide,

with every smack, 

a Zephyr,

with every heed.

a Wormhole..with every bat of an Eye..

Author's Note

enjoy..

Reviews

[Kirsty Woodward]

I miss your writing. Where you at.

[Desert Rose]

i miss writing myself, sitting on a few here, waiting for it to materialize,
was in Dubai a couple of weeks ago as you know, now i'm back in Lebanon, waiting for my sister's wedding to happen :)

[Kirsty Woodward]

I'll be waiting.
Yeah I can't believe I passed you. Crazy.
I came back earlier than planned so I probably passed you twice.
Amazing! That'll be beaut.

[Hailey Juliet]

Really nice poem, well thought out, as usual. This was my favorite bit:

a Blaze,
in the Gale of a Trachea,
a Breeze,
in the Maze of a Nose.

A very unique way to describe this, great imagery and metaphor happening here.
THanks for sharing!

[Desert Rose]

:) Thank you for reading!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A tactile piece, thought process of words, rather than prose really, a well executed piece.

[Desert Rose]

Thanks again Thomas!

[TL Boehm]

a worm hole with every bat of an eye. Wonderful line

[Desert Rose]

it's always like that in the very beginning, when you meet someone new, but who's at the same time not so new, & then you look them deep in the eye.. & you start extracting their stories...nothing like it..
Thanks :)

[Ghost]

Smooth and elegant. keep it up.

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Ghost, i will :)

[Hayli DeAnn]

Definitely a powerful read. The word choice and flow are very nice. Keep up the good work :)

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Hayli!! so sweet of you!

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice flow of words. I had to read again. Words have great power. You gave them strength and reason. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Desert Rose]

Thank you for your time!! i truly appreciate it! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Amy R]

nice work!
keep it up there!

[Desert Rose]

Thanks Amy! :)

[Amy R]

ur welcome!!

[Kirsty Woodward]

Brilliant use of personification. Thank you for the read request.

[Desert Rose]

glad you liked it, your opinion matters, be sure to check out my other writings too :)

[wordman]

you painted a vivid image ,great flow as well

[Desert Rose]

thanks for your support Wordman! :)