Dripping With Drops of Desire

Drip… drop… you always manage to make my heart stop… body temperature begins to rise… I look deep into your beautiful eyes… hands intertwined with mine… sparks flying so intensely you can see them polarize. 

Beads of sweat drip from every inch of my body, the flickering from the candle matches my breathing perfectly… light yet heavy, quick but easy, soft yet hard…you always somehow manage to take my breath away, switching the tempo leaving it unexpected… you have such a hold on me like wearing a necklace. 

The tussle in the sheets… always leaves my knees weak…even though I’m usually the on with many words yet I’m unable to speak. My body instead speaks for me, a different language… I’m left quivering and shaking like a high speed chase and the lane switched.

You see the goosebumps… my heart jumps..in between the thumps and bumps… you triumph in victory… I love when we make earth shattering history.

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

it is a wonderful. a free verse piece that still has poetic beats and unexpected rhymes. and you expliore the theme of love-making in a most tender way, not merely something you receive but something you feel gratitude for. such moments are life-affirming, but so is this poem. beautifully written.
one point: 3rd para i think you mean 'I'm usually the on[e]'

[NelliKong]

Thank you so much for your feedback. I'm glad that my poem gave you a positive reaction while you were reading. I appreciate you taking out the time to read one of my pieces.

[Dryford Chimutu]

Hi Nelli! I bet writers think the way their characters do. Your piece tells me a story. Good writing and the art of love. Well articulated in just a few verses.
My carry of the bunch is:

[The tussle in the sheets… always leaves my knees weak…even though I’m usually the on with many words yet I’m unable to speak. My body instead speaks for me, a different language… I’m left quivering and shaking like a high speed chase and the lane switched.]

Nice. That's what poetry is all about.

However, with my eyes failing I would love to see the next piece in 5px font size. Otherwise too small to read. i had to copy and then paste on Word page to increase the font.

[NelliKong]

Thank you for your feedback