Dancing With Daisies

I love dancing with daises in the garden, blooming daisies with new opportunities, love and good karma… the soil contains ingredients to keep them growing… even when the weeds are showing… life is on-going, but there’s beauty in the process… now when others see your beautiful garden you can test, that your hard work got you here… its been times when your garden didn’t receive any sun because the sky wasn’t clear. 

The dance I have with daises is different… even when the rhythm is off, the daises just switch the groove, even if the blues get caught in the tango… no matter the style of dance, my daises with still continue to grow.

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

reading this gave me good-feels all up and down my arms. men ought to love flowers, they bring so much joy to the world. yet while reading i couldn't help think this might be an extended metaphor. Confucius always talked about cultivating the garden of the soul. taking care of the soil is what brings about daisies, and we need to take care of our own body and minds brings dance. my experience reading this was very meditative.

[NelliKong]

Thank you. I'm glad my poem brought you positive feelings.