Rhythmical Creation

Rhythmical Creation

A Poem by NelliKong

I want to create a different sound with a different beat… one that awakens my inner self and makes me get on my feet… sometimes creation doesn’t involve anything major to ignite the heat… more oftentimes than not it’s about being subtle and discreet.


This song’s vibe is rhythmical… however it’s not typical… it takes me to a different place and makes it feel whimsical… I don’t have to overthink or overanalyze or think clinical or be too critical.


This musical piece was re-created using the paint keys…the beautiful sounds put meat ease… and let it carry me way like a leaf being carried away by the breeze.

© 2023 NelliKong


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It's not bad. I like it alot. Just minor Grammer mistakes, and a little strength to it is all it needs for it to blossom some more. You'll feel yourself get better and better each time you're on here, and as you write more and more as well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


NelliKong

1 Year Ago

I appreciate the constructive feedback

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Added on August 5, 2023
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NelliKong
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