Oh Caroline

Oh care, oh how much I have grown fond of you so dear, so much that I may shed a tear. Care I have grown fond of the laughter and times we have shared. C stands for conscientious nature; you’re attentive to details and that makes you special. A is for being adventurous and always seeking new challenges. You’re never afraid to take risks and to go after what you really want. R is for your ravishing and entrancing beauty. No world renowned model has anything on you;why? Because they don’t embody your overall presence. They say eyes are the windows to the soul; your ocean blue eyes match just that with many depths awaiting to be discovered. O represents your open heart that’s filled with endless generosity. Sugar isn’t sweet enough to describe how you were so kind to everyone. Your warm and infectious smile is enough to give anyone a toothache. L stands for lively and being the life of the party. Care your energy is so full that everyone in the room can feed off it. You’re like a magnet and pull us into your world and draw us in with your electromagnetic field. Next I stands for your independence because you’re never swayed by others. From playing video games to controversial topics you hold your own. N is for being nurturing due to you bringing out the best in those you care about. Love how you want everyone in the circle to play at their fullest potential. Lastly, E is for enriching because you make others’ lives more meaningful. You embody happiness to the tee; care brings something to the table that nobody else could ever imitate or copy. No matter how hard they try to recreate your individuality nothing beats the prototype. Whether you’re on the front line helping others or saying a funny punchline, I hope this is a sign that more beautiful memories will be made with my good friend Caroline. 

Reviews

[Lilly]

What a lovely tribute to a friend! I like that you have used each letter of their name to think about qualities you appreciate. My suggestion would be to structure it more like a typical acrostic poem, where each line, or, in this case, each small paragraph, would start with the letter. To me, this would just make it easier to read, so it's a personal preference and not something you need to do if you are happy with the current format!

[NelliKong]

I appreciate the constructive advice. I will keep this in mind when I do another writing piece

[lightsong]

The specialty about this is three things, the varied qualities, how detailed and personal it is, the type of the piece, the reader will feel it as a letter, and letters are special, and third the nickname "Care" and that what caught my mind first, it was chosen carefully and perfectly to suits your good friend. a lovely, sincere and wonderful piece my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the set-up of the poem Nelli Kong. Using each letter, to create a place or a thought. It was a wonderful poem for love and friendship.
Coyote