CHEATER

(i saw you again) 

(i saw you with her)

(you seemed so happy)

(so ill take that away)

she is a tramp (cant you see?)

she stares with eyes, numb from morphine (she is trash)

I really didn't want it to come to this

but you chose her over me

ill take you out, to a forest

where your screams cant be heard

its all over now

you belong to me

forever mine

never though you would cheat (just go behind my back)

and with her (of all people)

now i don't have to wonder (when your coming back)

because your six feet under (where you belong)

Reviews

[Not-So-Sure-Myself]

This was great! Powerfully written and a lot of people can relate to this. (I just hope you didn't write this because it happened to you, if it did I'm sorry! D: )

[Kenneth The Poet]

Love this.

[Kiari Sabon]

i love it and yeah it sucks when it happens

[Heromen Selena]

Very powerful. I'm not sure if this was a result of someone cheating on you but you made me believe that someone did because of the amount of emotion in this poem. I got chills in the fourth paragraph. Nice job.

[Silent Knight]

LOVE IT. I know this feeling very well as everyone I have dated has cheated me or used me.

[Alewis]

i think every girl feels this way when they r cheated on and i like how you put it into words :) great write

[joan]

Nicely put into words. Liked reading this. Did a good job. Impressed. Hope to see more. Leftyiam123

[Serenity]

Its a great read. Cheating is something that some have to live through and it hurts not knowing if your significant other has someone else besides you but it hurts even more when you do know they are unfaithful to you because How do you deal with that, how do you live with knowing that they are with someone else besides you, Its a great read and I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for writing and keep up the good work :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I love your response to the ever maddening cheating that surrounds us all, well done, good read.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

A great poem! I think it could be a great song, too! Those lines in brackets could be turned to some whispering echo in the background.....very good job! :D