Broken Heart

maybe if my heart stops, so will the pain

with every breath, i feel it in my chest

i see you when i close my eyes

spreading that horrible pain

my heart feels like glass

the crack speading

like spiderwebs

 

i need you

to block all the pain

loving you was my everthing

all i ever needed or wanted was you

and then you turned and left me all alone

 

i feel like jumping off of the roof

jumping in front of a car

anything to stop it

its unbearable

 

Reviews

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Emotional, heartfelt. Great write!

[~M&A~]

Heartfelt, your emotions were put behind this and you can see it ^^ Great write

[sugar]

Ive felt like this so many times but it does get way better, nice job expressing your feelings

[nevershoutnever.]

ohmigawd! Love it! Uber well written!! :)

[PyroKitty24]

Very nice~ the emotions were clearly portrayed and able to be felt

[Lily Mae]

The worst thing in life is loss and a broken heart but once healed you find love again..xx A passionate write... full of raw emotion...well done..xx