Music

It is defening, because it is absent.

There is nothing there, no sound

i need to escape this gray place

so full of hoplessness and no

sound at all. i cannot stand

it, this horrible place feels

just like Hell.

 

I would give anything to hear the music again.

the sweet music that gave me my sweet hope

i could use it in this place where hope is

nonexistant. Where could it have gone?

My sweet music, it just dissappeared

i miss you, so please come back

return to me

 

A life without the music, how i could i live?

I cannot hear anything, except my own

thought, taunting me. It is all gone

the music i loved so dearly has

abandoned me, my love

please come back.

Reviews

[Calypso]

Love is life.
Right now I'm listening to Barton Hollow by The Civil Wars and I'm feeling great!

[Ame Rain]

So nice to read , feel and imagin it :) . NICE !! ,,

Keep writing ^^

[~Lizzy♬]

Awesome poem! You have great talent of writing poetry. :)

~Lizzard~

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Mika, what a furiousness and talented prose, well done, granbs the reader by the balls and never lets go - good read

[Ice-Fire]

I like it two thumbs up from me :)

[quinfinn]

mika, mika, mika.... you have a tendency to just automatically place your work in my faves. this is positively wonderful! your descending paragraph style(that's what i call it) is not easy to accomplish, so...add that to wonderfully written verse and , well, you've got talent!