The Silent Me

Death fails

to reach her

The silent me

escapes to live

in the stars above

 

A whisper in

the night, a small

breeze lifts my eyes

I look upon her with

pity in my gaze, for this girl

 

The silent me

stares back with

eyes gray. A silent

tear rolls down a pale

cheek. She prays for death

 

A fallen star

takes her away

a quiet place where

she is left to die. A smile

taunts the silent me, she has Her prayer

Reviews

[Madds]

That was amazing - I feel the same.

[quinfinn]

you may be a young lady, but you definitely have the soul of an ancient one.
i feel you are a great poet reincarnate. never stop using this talent for it is your gift from the great spirit and your blessing on the world. outstanding! another for my library...