Me?

A lone feather

brushes her softly

the angelic me

laughs to herself

her white wings

bound while

black wings haunt

 

 

Alone in the world

her prayers are lost

a star whispers

endless betrayel

blood stained tears

fall to the ground

forgotten by all

 

This is her world.

This is their world.

 

Every "me" lives

and dies as one

 

i am alone

forgotten by "me"

i am hollow

left to die

alone in the world

my eyes close

as do hers

the angelic me

is no more                        

Reviews

[Calypso]

The color has something nice to this.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

direct and to the point, an intriguing read

[~Lizzy♬]

I loved the imagery and beauty that flowed through the poem. :)

~Lizzard~

[quinfinn]

another great write! suggest the duality of self and exemplifies it gracefully...
you are a word wizard.... i applaud you

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

A perfect combination of dark and light!