Watch and Wait

They watch and wait.

When you sleep

when you eat

they are

there

 

The patient me watches.

Contempt in her eyes

contempt for the

dead and for

the living

hate for

all

 

None can pass their gaze.

they wait and watch

one mistake can

mean cartain

death

 

The patient me hates.

she hates me and

she hates you

all of us

watch

and

wait

Reviews

[Ame Rain]

i like it , i like the way your bring the words , and the way u showing us . when i read it , lol i feel like little weird air :P . but i truly love it :)

[quinfinn]

i love the way you formatted this one, and i love the poem intensely. nice work!