Unkind

On the ledge I sit

Looking out at the millions of lights

By the happy souls they are dimly lit

Sorrow and loneliness fill my being

as i look at the water below

my thoughts are slowly fleeing

To a time so long ago

when I had friends and people to turn to

when the lazy days went by so slow

to a time when I kept on going

and enjoyed the company of others

slowly it's leaving me, fading

where did those happy days go?

when did I stop feeling so happy?

When did I stop letting it all show?

I'll just leave it all behind

And hope that when I come back

The voices won't be so unkind

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Very relatable and realistic....Bravo........................

[Daisy Morgy]

happy souls they are dimmly lit...love it!!!

[Sam Romero (TBC)]

I love this. I felt it being at night time, more visible for me i guess. ^-^

[Mika Haruna]

Yes! That's what i was going for!(:

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, a feeling we have all beared and felt, well done, good read.

[Mika Haruna]

Thank you! ^.^

[Not-So-Sure-Myself]

Ah, I was able to understand the speaker's sense of loneliness through how they reminisced to the past. I liked it!

[Mika Haruna]

Thank you so much!