Life

                                   Sadness faster than night

Waiting for the sun rise

Time ticks waiting for the world to die

When the sun rises its only for a blink

Almost nonexistent on the world 

But death is but a long blink

Finally achieving the closest to death 

Is the darkest point in our lives the happiest 

Author's Note

Just give general criticism and please don't steal and tell me if you post it anywhere please.

Reviews

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Hi it's a good poem you wrote. I love reading poems about others' life and their point of view to it. I'll look forward for your future writings :)