†he lion inside

†he lion inside

A Poem by Neira.B

Let the lion inside of you roar

It's time to defeat them all

You've been hurt so much

But this time you're gonna kill them all  

You're strong you're brave

Let the pain go away

It's your moment to shine

Now put on that smile

Let the lion roar them afraid

From the girl that didn’t break

© 2014 Neira.B


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Let the lion roar them afraid.? afraid I wouldn't use that word

Maybe just keep it ''Let the lion roar" But other than that, I think you did a wonderful job in expressing courage and letting your strong attitude shine.

I do hope that I was helpful
--maria

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neira.B

10 Years Ago

Yes it was helpful and thank you for the advice Maria
maria  ( rose)

10 Years Ago

You are so welcome! anytime my friend :)



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Great writing and inspiring.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neira.B

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much
A beautiful write. This is a strong and inspirational piece. Keep writing. Good luck and have a nice day.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neira.B

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much .
Let the lion roar them afraid.? afraid I wouldn't use that word

Maybe just keep it ''Let the lion roar" But other than that, I think you did a wonderful job in expressing courage and letting your strong attitude shine.

I do hope that I was helpful
--maria

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neira.B

10 Years Ago

Yes it was helpful and thank you for the advice Maria
maria  ( rose)

10 Years Ago

You are so welcome! anytime my friend :)

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Added on March 12, 2014
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Neira.B
Neira.B

New York, NY



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