Death of A Nightmare Flower

Death of A Nightmare Flower

A Poem by Neal S



Beauty unimaginable
Darkness inconceivable
A look that will turn your rebellion to stone
Scattered etchings of suicidal dramas in her mind
Slashing skin because the chaos pain was to real
Too close
The one who gives
And gives
Until time to take
The one who stands speechless
But walks with the blood of your heart in her pocket like loose change
She is a nightmare
A flower
Picked and blown away by the wind screaming through the sky

© 2020 Neal S


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oh my goodness :(( she slips away like a mist no matter the love offered :((( L3 is killer for me .. as if the eyes of God are beheld .. and squirming ... brutal honesty demanded .. wow! i think your poem is deeply sad .. deeply spiritual .. and strong voice for those who so utterly feel incapable of expressing their pain .. that cutting is the only answer seen .. well done says i .. strong voice for those unable .. nice work!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neal S

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the read.



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oh my goodness :(( she slips away like a mist no matter the love offered :((( L3 is killer for me .. as if the eyes of God are beheld .. and squirming ... brutal honesty demanded .. wow! i think your poem is deeply sad .. deeply spiritual .. and strong voice for those who so utterly feel incapable of expressing their pain .. that cutting is the only answer seen .. well done says i .. strong voice for those unable .. nice work!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neal S

4 Years Ago

Thanks for the read.
Has the sound of a tragedy. The subject of the poem was seemingly troubled, possibly a self mutilator. Apparently she took it too far.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neal S

4 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read.

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Hello everyone. My name is Neal Sanford and i'm a chef from Tupelo Mississippi. I've been writing for what seems like my entire life but just of late been keeping a record of them. My main focus is po.. more..

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