Reviews

Just a small reminder to have fun with what you're doing.

In the end we write to please

Whether or not it comes with ease

Does it make your heart sing

How bout your eyes gleam 

That's what its all about

So I set 

And click away 

Then try to think of something

Cool to say

Did it mean this 

Or possibly that

Was the wording lean

No the structure was too fat

Just remember 

If you jot down things about 

The breeze 

Or trees 

Some manly sleaze

Bees 

Your sister bow legged knees

In the end

We just write to please

Reviews

[Lorry]

That is all we can do Neal. No matter what the intention, we only publish work on sites such as these to get more of a feel for the reaction of our words, and we learn from them, as well as reading others works. We may not all be seeking out the fame monster, but words need to be shared to be understood, and understanding brings learning and adapting to the forefront of our minds. We're all just a massive classroom of eager pupils, hoping for the occasional A+ :)

[Neal S]

Indeed. I totally agree that words need to be shared and most definitely the feeling of those words need to be shared. (to me) poetry is about the "feel's" the emotional connect the reader has to the content and honestly not as much as what I get from writing it. But mostly this poem is about Just having fun and how terrible I am at reviews lol :)

[Lorry]

Ha, honesty always wins Neal. I find just saying what you felt, no matter if it is the intended subject is most appreciated. After reading some honest reviews, you will begin to see things in your own words and go "oh yeah, I never thought of that" :)

[Neal S]

I need to just start a Neal scale of rating...Cool..Super cool..Badass and Most Badass!! lol

[Neal S]

Come over to my page and check the chart to see where they landed...

[Paul Bell]

Well i think that's the bees knees.
Can't speak for my sister though.

[Neal S]

lol..Thank you Paul!

[Shannon]

Interesting take. The rhyme here, especially the exaggerated section, really works. Feels like it's meant to be real aloud.

[Neal S]

Why thank you. :)

[D Connolly]

Good job Neal! This is what we talked about though; it's not always about perfect structure or rhythm, it just has to be from the heart and soul. "Cool" LOL ;)

[Neal S]

Thanks :) ..Glad you liked it.