Energy

Explosive 

I can’t quite contain it

Lets tear it down

Cut into the surface 

Then bring it back

Back 

And its wordless

Reviews

[Papaya]

Wow. What to say. Blown away?
Definitely high impact. I like that it leaves so much to the imagination but you just feel like something big and important has happened. It actually in a way reminds me of some of mine. That's not a plug for my poetry on your poetry. That would be so tacky. :) But to me it feels like a theme I have that is recurring in one or two of mine. Sometimes you just have to tear that s**t down, demolish it, destroy it, wipe it clean. To make way for something new, better, more meaningful. That's what this says to me.

[Neal S]

lol.. I take that as a high complement. And I agree, in order to have something new some old things must be torn away. Love the review. Thanks so much!

[Papaya]

You're welcome!

[aLittlePain]

Yeah that's fierce! You could expand on that but damn that's got synergy! Gold star for you ;) R xo

[Neal S]

yeah i'm still thinking on this one. Thanks

[Ken Simm.]

Bang. Laser thoughts. Short but I want to say snappy. Not a good enough word however. So small but so multi layered.

[Neal S]

Thank you Ken. This is one of those that the more I look at it i'm not sure if its finished yet. Hmm just not sure. But thank you for the review Sir.