Wooden

Wrap me in tomorrows

For I am small

Behind bars 

You are golden

 My skin dangles from wooden bones

 For I am weak

My light is yours to take

Drink it up

Reviews

[costa siwale]

Satirical read, like the linkage of words and the cliff-hanger of an ending, I want more lol
well written

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"Wooden"
Neal S,
I wondered is this had to do with relationship
between the young and the old. If we have the
priviledge of knowing someone older than we;
oh what a treasure. For they have lived and
experinced so much and lived in a differing
time, culture and condition so different from ours.
They have so much to share and teach:
"for I am small
behind bars
You are golden
My skin dangles from wooden bones
For I am weak
My light is yours to take
Drink it up"
Great poem at least to what was gleaned from
my perspective.
blessings,
Kathy

[aLittlePain]

Diggin that one too. R xo

[Neal S]

Well I dig that you're digging it..Thanks

[Papaya]

Second last line is stunning.
open to interpretation...
I like it.

[Neal S]

Thanks i'm glad you like it.

[Valentine]

Wouldn't it be great if those tomorrows never had to end. Valentine

[Neal S]

Indeed it would :) ..Thank you so much for reading my work.

[wordman]

sounds like a love poem,and a good one..

[Neal S]

Well thank you Sir.

[wordman]

you`re welcome