The One

 Her heart resides in my heart

living

Refusing to wash away

She fragments my soul like a dandy lion in the wind

 Thrust up into the cool breeze of faith

Only to be found in the grass of the shade tree drooping low

Pick me and thrust me up please 

Then come to find me

Reviews

[R. Schreiber]

The words go together so nicely, this piece is very beautiful, love it!

[Neal S]

Thanks so much!!

[$amala]

Fairly craft the scene , words flows beautifully
Fine art

[Neal S]

Thank you so much!

[Lorry]

The beauty from within yourself and that other, connecting in a way we can only stand in awe at, and be grateful it touches/touched our lives. Flawlessly penned, with not a word out of place.

[Neal S]

Thank ya Sir!!

[HeyJadeXO]

look at you ........all romantic and stuff =] I like it !

[Neal S]

Well thank ya. I have my moments lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Her heart resides in my heart
living
Refusing to wash away"
I think it's us who don't want to forget the ones who leave us,otherwise they have already washed away...
I loved reading this one! Heart-touching..

[Neal S]

Thank you!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome :)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

It's flawless!
I love the way emotions are conveyed..
It's romantic, at the same time deeply expressing thought!
It was a great read :)

[Neal S]

Thank you so much!! And for taking the time to read my work.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

It was my pleasure reading this!
Welcome!!

[aLittlePain]

All I can say is you have a romantic heart and poetic soul my man. You're quickly becoming a favourite! R xo

[Neal S]

Just to kind ...Thank you :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...that line, "she fragments my soul like a dandelion in the wind" could very well stand on its own! Nicely done, Neal!

[Neal S]

Thank you so much!

[Hebe]

What great writing, you are very creative .... she fragments my soul.... you know how to love! :)

[Neal S]

Oh wow! Very kind words. Thank you so much.