Alone

Alone is how I feel,

Alone is who I am,

Alone I don't want to be but is forced to be,

empty hearted I am,

speechless I am,

deaf I am,

blind I am,

and emotionless I've become.

 

My heart is closed shut not letting any new love to enter,

only allowing the blood to flow in and out freely.

My eyes are blind not allowing me to see the good and only the bad is what my vision captures.

My lips are zipped shut not allowing me to utter the words "I love you", but only allowing words of hurt and pain to charge out of them.

My ears are deaf not allowing sweet nothings to vibrate through my canal and only allowing ignorance to flow in.

My emotions are numb due to the lack of love I am not recieving, love that I desperately desire, desperately need, but cannot have because...I am alone...alone is how I feel....alone....is me.

 

                          One love,

                          Negrita

 

Reviews

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

how beautiful and touching this beautiful heart of yours....you just gave me a job to do........ i need to go see my lil friend...my husband who feels like you do in this poem...thanks for sharing this...now i gotta go get things sorted out....thank you....and inspiration to my life you just became....thank you so much! x00x0x0

[Lady V]

It does feel like we have noone in the world at times. Yet still we have our words and whomever they touch. We at times are alone only because we choose to be. I do understand exactly how you felt when you wrote this. Great piece.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[Meredith Leigh]

This is so heartfelt and so strong in emotion that I could almost feel that pain that you were describing. it was very well done and very effective. Great write, I loved it!

- Kriss

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I feel EVERY SINGLE LINE that you wrote! I really enjoyed this piece!

"My heart is closed shut not letting any new love to enter,
only allowing the blood to flow in and out freely.
My eyes are blind not allowing me to see the good and only the bad is what my vision captures.
My lips are zipped shut not allowing me to utter the words "I love you", but only allowing words of hurt and pain to charge out of them."

Perfect display of what a broken heart goes through. You captured it! Great write.....

[Michael X]

This is powerful and well written and the meaning is certainly from the heart and thats what makes this poem stand out with its passionate suffering and soulfilled content- this is a beautiful poem

[THE LOST ROSE]

I am not suppose to be on this site I am cheating myself but this poem was worth it. I love the honesty and the emotions you have showcased here. Wonderful job. I love this line;

My ears are deaf not allowing sweet nothings to vibrate through my canal and only allowing ignorance to flow in.