I Will Survive

This may not be the best but I let the pen and feelings write this...Hope you understand what I'm trying to explain

Looking into the mirror,

What do I see?

I don't recognize it,

Nor do I want to,

Even though the facts are there,

I am scared,

Looking into the mirror,

 I might see,

A image I don't know,

and fear to understand,

I might see,

but may be blinded by the obstacles,

I think I might lose,

Looking into the mirror,

I see an image of a face,

An image of me,

analyzing this portrait,

I now become,

A soldier out of the darkness,

and strive to succeed,

Triumph over enemies,

I must fight,

A battle I must win,

A battle I must defeat,

Even though it's an army of only me.

 

Casting all fear and doubts aside,

I raise my head up high,

place a grin from ear to ear,

I walk with glee,

I walk with pride,

Emphasize it with every stride,

I WILL SURVIVE!

 

                     One love,

                     Negrita

 

 

Reviews

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

oh gurl gurl gurl.....you are a wizzard in female form....x0x0x0 brilliant lil' woman you are! x0x00x

[THE LOST ROSE]

Wow I love this motivation called to action style poetry. This was powerful and a poem we should all read when we are down or unsure of a task. This will jump start you for sure. Great write and I thank lady V for sending me this read request. I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Michael X]

I love the powerful sense your words flow with I believe the word choice sincerely accentuated the passionate meaning, its raw and flows with conviction, I 'm sure many people can relate excellent poem

[Emily B]

Beautiful strong work from a magnificent woman. Looking forward to learning more of you.

[Xeru]

Yeah I'm feeling this... The last thing any adversary wants to see is an enemy with a smile on his or her face... Sounds like you are intuned with your Star player lol. Good stuff. Real nice encouraging piece... Everybody goes threw those moments and I like how your piece responds... Encore

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

That's what's up!!! I like the progression and premise.
Strong piece!

"I must fight,
A battle I must win,
A battle I must defeat,
Even though it's an army of only me."

Great words!

[Lady V]

Great piece. Determination is always a wonderful thing. It keeps us going even when people around us seem to stand in our way. When we as individuals realize that we are our biggest obstacle then things will go alittle easier.


Keep focused.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V