Water Light

The someplace between water and light

 

A splash of color calms

the feel of light where

clouds gather to watch

the sun play on water

with energy drawn from

a blue horizon of shadow

rays a mirage of water

light peeking through

as the air watches

from a distance

Author's Note

Please share your views with me.

Reviews

[zainul]

I must say that this little poem is a piece of dazzling gem.
Posted five years back,it comes like comet in our orbit as a rare event to enlighten us by the beauty of nature
you instilled in this amazing piece.
Thank you for sharing the wonderful thoughts.

[Karen]

Thank you so much for your beautiful words. Nature is so beautiful and so inspiration that it makes me want to so sing, but since I cant sing, I write poetry instead ;)

[zainul]

You are always welcome,dear friend.:)
I am very glad to read your joyful expression.
I love your passion for song and poetry.
I used to sing a lot when I was young.
Though I have not learned to sing with music,yet I love singing now and then.
I think song and poem are very close in nature.
I appreciate your nice gesture.:)

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful , balisimo , even amazing...:)......................

[Karen]

Thanks, Sami. So what did you like about it?

[Sami Khalil]

Oainting and watercolors are beautiful imagery . The hues of light nature where water meets the paint and brush on easy on the palettes...Imagery is wonderful...:)...........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this reminds me of people...some actually interact with each other...and cause colors to change hue....and points of view...while others just watch...keeping their space from involvement.

nicely worded, Karen.

[Karen]

I've always believed that at some level Nature is a reflection of humanity (or vice versa?) and you have expressed this perfectly in your comment. Thank you, Jacob, for reading my poem, even as old as this one :)

[Aethereal]

It seems to me that you view most of the traits of Nature as playful little children interacting with each other. Everything that you're aware of has a personality that may be played out within a poem that reveals its true significance.You did a fine job here of express this relationship within Nature. Color clams, Clouds gather to watch; the Sun plays; Light peeks, and Air watches.

[Karen]

Thanks, Aethereal! I love the image of Nature as a playful child frolicking about! Awesome! Thank you for your comment on the way I express the nature of Nature.

[Aethereal]

Nature is an eternal child.

[Lydia Shutter]

Great personificaton in this one. Though I have only read a few of your poems, I see a lot of poetry centers on the shoreline, the sky, the sun. I find all three very inspirational as well and perhaps that is why I enjoy your poetry as much as I do. Great work. Lydi**

[Karen]

Thank you! Nature is so beautiful I always seem to find her an inspiration. I truly enjoy your poetry as well!

[Rain]

I loved this. Your contrast of water and light blend so well. The light make water glisten..water is the suns mirror. Great piece. Rain..

[Karen]

Thank you, Rain! I hope it's not too late to say thanks!