deep movement

deep movement

A Poem by breezy

We walk to see the stars,

never knowing if we'll ever walk this road again

who can tell which road it is,

in our hearts

or under our feet?

my heart beating as heavily as an earthquake

makes me feel at ease,

all because feeling life ecstatically

is how I want to be

like hot tea for a sore throat

it soothes me

knowing you are there

© 2009 breezy


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Wow, this is really good. Your flow is amazing and your word choice is great. Good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


You have alot of talent girl! I really liked this one. I think your poetry has a deeper level than just the surface topic. Its really wonderful

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very well written. Excellent job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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This is an awesome piece! It is very sweet.

Posted 15 Years Ago


this is wonderful . . . so glad you came to visit my work today. Otherwise, I might never have found it.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 13, 2009
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I'm just beginning to keep my work and show people. I feel vulnerable letting people see my writing, I haven't put much on here that I've put part of myself in to but I'm working up the courage ;) A.. more..

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