Within Me

Today I am sad

Yesterday I was sad

Why am I here?

I asked the gentile moon

He responded 

The only way out is too look in

The karma cards told me Trouble

The tarot cards told me Hurt

Who am I to believe? 

Was it luck that gave me these cards

or am I just going insane

I have made these scars on my body and in my mind

No health or sanity comes to me 

Will God judge me as I walk into the Gates of Heaven like the others?

Quiet yelled the angels

Peace will come

All you have do is look within 

Reviews

[Nick Arouet]

It's very emotional, very thoughtful. I think you've succeeded in making me want to contemplate deeper into your poem's meaning. I really like this one. The constant interjection of questions really makes the reader stop and contemplate the answers, I think.

[violetta york / nicki elle]

Thank you :-)