Half-Past Angry

writers block type material. it was vastly written, just about my current anger.

Don't make me angry

Don't call me names

Don't get the fire started

Burning loads of rage

Don't make fun of me

Don't tell me what I am

Don't supply me with hurt

I'm already full of doubt

Don't tell me what I can do

Don't make me cry and yell

Don't force this to be any worse

You already started this Hell

I need to show my emotion

I need to get the point across

All my life i've been angry

So hang me on a cross

Author's Note

ignore the pattern of rhyme.

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

A step to begin, now whip that pillow !

[violetta york / nicki elle]

XD

[Baby Ricochet]

If you want someone to ignore something whatever you do don't point it out. Some of the best stuff comes out of writer's block. Some of my funniest poems were created that way cause I break through the block by making up absurd rhymes.
Hey man did you see that thing
It got s**t on me and everything
What do you think santa will bring
I hope I get a hooker on a string
Silly right? That's how I break writer's block but I love writing funny poems

[violetta york / nicki elle]

Lovely! Thank you so much for your review, it built a little confidence in my writers-block skills. ;)

[twinklestar]

It's epic :D. Really feel the last verse " I need to show my emotion
I need to get the point across
All my life i've been angry
So hang me on a cross "

[violetta york / nicki elle]

Thank you! I'm glad you can connect with the writing :)

[Sid]

Great write, you caught the emotions very well with your words and I like the repetitive nature of the 1st 3 stanzas, quite powerful...great write!!

[violetta york / nicki elle]

Thank you! :-)

[DrD]

I was enjoying this very much until the final stanza. For some reason (probably only me) the "hang me on a cross" did not really connect with the earlier phrases. I like the theme very much because it has great potential and I know you can bring it across with impact. Again, I liked the work, but please reconsider the final stanza or accept the fact that I am an eccentric entitled to be an opinionated a*s.

[violetta york / nicki elle]

The "hang me on the cross" was supposed to mean that I was a sinner for being angry and making mistakes.

[DrD]

I understood that but for some reason it didn't gel with the rest but again, that's just me and it's your work.