暴风 Storm

I heard thunder out my window, and starting rhyming the first few lines in my head and wrote it down. :-)

The storm is loud but I am calm;

  I enjoy the sound of blistery napalm.

Mother nature works her best,

rain falling down, creating mess.

The thrilling sound of sirens roar, 

I gaze out my window for some more.

You feel the rain on your skin,

bring it in and cleanse your sins.

A powerful storm brings tears and joy,

and nothing more than a grim toy.

Cloudy weather and no sun shine,

loud claps of thunder from time to time.

Author's Note

Thank you TTBoy28 for the suggestions and edits :)

Reviews

[TTBoy28]

Great start to a wonderful poem, Nicole Elena! Lots of emotion here! You can always see and feel the imagery of a storm...thunder, lightning, fear, cleansing, gripping, dripping wet. I really enjoyed this!

[violetta york / nicki elle]

Thank you so much! You're wonderful :) really made my day a bit better whenever I read your reviews on my poems!

[TTBoy28]

It's truly heartfelt! Please don't stop!