Friend

13/06/12 06:31 pm

i wish i could confide in you, tell you why.

it really is quite an acceptable excuse.

but still, it is an excuse.

the fault lays with me.

it is i who has not one, but many fatal flaws.

it is i who is a danger.

Reviews

[The dark story]

you should have used "an" instead of "a"..........but yet it is a sweet poem........i think you should have elaborated a bit.....

[Maria]

thank you! i'll correct it