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A Poem by Nebunova

Judge me.
Judging you.
I judge you because I swear to god you're judging me.
You judge me in response to my "I'm judging you" face
But this isn't the right time or place
for such nonsense.
So when is?
The fact of the matter is,
society will judge you regardless.........................................................................But if I stay in tuned with myself
Not even the king's smirks or slurs will phase this
I possess the ability to deflect and redirect your vibes untarnished
What heads in your direction is the essence of your reflection

Meanwhile I head towards the sign that reads "Higher Self"
Digging deeper for the rules that define my meaning
I may come off as selfish or self-centered
But I must seek the valleys of my soul
Where true judgement resides within the section
of my heart...
                         
           The epitome of my reflection.


© 2013 Nebunova


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I judge you because I swear to god you're judging me.
You judge me in response to my "I'm judging you" face...

Yep - this is the essence of human interaction, sad to say. Good, clear images and a thoughtful topic. I enjoyed this, Nebunova.

Posted 10 Years Ago


What heads in your direction is the essence of your reflection-

I have become your fan. tremendous write with strong narratives :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's written in the Bible, you know, that book self righteous Christians beat other people over the head with with to justify they're own bullshit. Somewhere in that bloody thing it says we shouldn't judge but hey, we do it anyway. There's stuff in their about not masturbating or performing oral sex as well but we do that too and anal is a big no no. Man that book is a buzz kill.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nebunova

10 Years Ago

omg, my ribcage hurts. this is all too true my friend.
Nya Joy Simmons

10 Years Ago

Gr8 I loved it!

Once again, you managed to pent EXACTLY what you wanted to, getting all your ideas onto paper. Er, screen in this case. Great write!
-Dragon


Posted 10 Years Ago


love "but i seek the vallues of my soul". but this is very true.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A new view and experience of an older esoteric truth of life ... but where the old may be profound ... the new refers to common sense and the ... just so ... of one individual's right to express her truth. Nicely done Neb.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like the idea of this poem, especially the seeming redemption you made on the second stanza. Indeed, we are being judged and we make judgement every time; personally and as part of a society. But being still and serene within ourselves, and being focused on our own inner peace, we can never be broken by anything. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was unique and just amazing. I enjoyed it. Very thought provoking. xo Winter

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love the uniqueness of this write, especially the layout, which is really effective. I think the line "I may come off as selfish or self-centred" might have more impact if other words were used instead of "come off" like perhaps "appear" "present" or "portray myself"?? We are indeed our own worst critics and the inner critic is brutal. I agree with the last line second stanza that we attract what we reflect. Very intense and thought-provoking. Great job. Justine :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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