Secrets..

This is a poem about natures secrets, i say this is for everyone , but it really depends on what style of writing you like.

Trees whisper from one another,

Rustling their leaves,

All the secrets that they hide,

It's just that no one sees.

They come and go but no one knows,

The stories that they hide.

No one listens no one tries,

All i wonder is why?

Why they're left unspoken.

Author's Note

i am only a young writer and this is the first proper deep poem i have wrote. Could you please leave a comment saying what you think and maybe some writing tips. Thank you.

Reviews

[Scott_Central]

For a first poem, this is very good :) And even better so because you made it rhym too (something I'm really bad at), Keep writing poems, theyre not my strong point but I find that everytime you write one, you get better and get an easier hand on it. Very Well done :)

[Sujash I. Purna]

It's a promising piece of poetry. Loved the essence of a mystery. I would like to know when you are writing more great poems! I'm giving it 100 :)