my writting

this is what my writting is to me

i write  a poem

i write a song

i write because i can

my writing

my voice

can you hear it

can you understand it

i am quite

but my writing is loud

louder then my voice

sometime i don't understand

but my hand does

its like that first kiss

that tingle feeling you get when you are with him

but for me it just my pen and paper

my writing speaks of love

it speaks of hate

it contradicts what it says

but yet it is so true

it tell who i am

but also who i am not

it tell secrets very secretly

sometimes it makes me laugh

sometimes it makes me cry

my writing speaks a number of tongues

listen to its jokes

not that funny

but yet it represents me

my writing

my voice

my story

i love it when my pen and paper meet

because my writing conceived

and my voice give birth to it.

Reviews

[Pickleby Davies]

I really like it and how honest it feels to read. The only corrections I have is that you have several spelling errors (poen->poem, quite->quiet, dose->does, tinggly->tingly, contrdicts->contradicts, ect.) Also remember to I your i 's . This is really great work though and once you fix the spelling issues in it this will be fantastic! Great idea.

[biggerthenu]

this is hot really catchy i loved it nice

[naz]

Thank you Davies, I have just fixed it. Thank you for the comment.