Lost

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Blank Surroundings

All White

I've whirled

I've called

But I haven't seen

I can't find you

I can't find your 

Sweet usual scent

You're gone

Vanished into

Thin air

I've put out my hands

I've searched for 

Your body

But I can't

Feel its warmth

It's tightness

I'm lost

I can't see

Anything

I'm blind

Lost in

Translation

I loved you

But you've 

Run

Reviews

[Kansas Aurora]

This reminds me of being spun around in circles and then having to go try and tag another kid. :D
But seriously, you've capture the whirlwind motion of loss that happens when someone leaves quickly and pulls and the heart strings. The flow and form enhance the meaning of the piece. I like it!

KA