My True Love

i lost my head when i met you

i gained a sense of love when the love was new

I had the guard of a billion locks

but you had a key to break those blocks

i told you love isn't possible

but any thing is possible and we are unstoppable

You pulled my heart out of my head

and told me to let go of the things that are dead

past relationships , heart breaks , and loss of communication

Thinqs that hurt me and pointless suffication

He told me im real and you should trust your man

and i'm no afraid to love so i took his hand

i chose to lay n his bed of love and all thinqs that apeal to me

with my head on tight im no fool for love so i take it in deep

I take a breath and open my eyes and see your honest soul

give me a siqn that i have control

his smoothe words gently put me on a cloud of pleasure

in love with what you show me and i'll be yours forever. 

Hold my heart with your securing arms and take all of me

Im yours and i let go and put it on the table lets be

lets float lets be free

a dance of deep true love for everyone to see

You put the perfect balance in my life

you and i work just rite.

 

Reviews

[Pollyanna]

Very raw, but works well as a rough draft. With a bit of tweaking, it'll be great!

[Pebbles]

very romantic .. :)

[rwar ish me]

aw this is very good, Keep writing

[sarah]

This is so wonderful! this is so romantic and relatable great work!