Do you love me?

i wrote this to my boyfriend

       If I were to look into your eyes

     And tell you all kinds of lies

  would you trust meh?

could we go back to the way we use to be?

       I know the answer and i ask for a purpose

     i want to know if im worth it

   I want to know if you truely give me your heart

 will you stay faithful when we are apart?

never leave m in the dark?

 never leave me for another?

will we always love each other?

    wil you think before you act?

there is a fear you will leave, and never com back

 and have me asking "where you at?"

     you never have to worry about me

i'll never leave

  i'll make you strong because you make me weak

with your kiss your touch

  your soft voice and your endless love.

Author's Note

really read this poem and ask your self some questions.

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is a well-written poem, good flow and the ending ties in really well with the beginning. Something we should all ask our bfs and potential partners. Good write!

[OtherWorldWoman]

I think many people can relate to such a situation as this and I think that it is important to be able to have relatable poems, because it causes more people to really feel the emotion that you are trying to put out there and express. I really like the rhythym and the wording that you used here. Good work :}

[Sukriti Suki]

nice work.

[rwar ish me]

this is good, I have often thought and asked these questions. Very good writing!