Combative

Knowing emotions are always high,

Why provoke?

Knowing there is no compromise,

Why talk?

Don't expect you to wait,

When patience is absent.

Don't expect you to be perfect,

When you are human too.

Why take my goodness for evilness

When love is all I have to give.

Let's turn combat into compromise.

Lets not give the corrupt, the win.

We are the winners 

With strength we conquer. 

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

You have written what first came to mind, that shows the heart of you. Freestyle is how we speak, not with punctuation but either laugh or tear - but honest.

[Daz]

A lovely freestyle with depth.
I enjoyed it.

[Falanne Shanta]

I absolutely love this. It's so profound.

[nayeli]

Thank you for your comment.

[sette]

Let's turn combat into compromise.
Lets not give the corrupt the win.
We are the winners when we are strength. I like these following lines because i firmly believe that there is still goodness in every man. nice writing

[nayeli]

Thank you that's exactly what I want people to either relate or understand.